Feedback Notes
feedback for Rachel Zemser
- I love the concept and the images!
- In the first pair, the text is too close to the border (all of them)
o The black text for the screen is kind of illegible
o Text for the phone could be a little bolder because of small space it is taking up
- Wicked Witch
o The text for the screen looks too condensed to the corner
o Maybe if you go into photoshop and darken the background, you can make the text run across over the witch
o Same goes for the phone screen
- The last pair
o The text needs to have more leading and seems condensed in the wide screen
o Shift image a little to the left
o The text for the phone is a little hard to read
- Overall, it looks pretty good, but the text itself is a little hard to read, so maybe using a bolder typeface could help with that